its so cute

TY.

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I like. <3

Props for cell-shading, it r hard to resist TEH URGE 2 BLEND. I knowz.

Definately crisp and pretty, and I'm in love with Dr---...Scorpious' expression of teh wuvz. <3


MUDKIPZ!?!?!?!

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Whoadeah.

W-o-w. Shading is uber hard for meh. Great job!

I think it looks mighty fine for a first attempt! You didn't overdo it like first time users tend to do, and simple cel shading is always a winning choice.

If I had to be picky, I'd say that the shading on Rose's face is a bit incongrous with the light source, since it's supposed to be on the darker side. Though I understand it might bother you to have her face in the dark, since the pic is focused on the kiss, so it's no big deal.
^{(I just noticed, the way her breast kind of perks up is a little weird, too. XD' )}

Just trying to help; overall it's pretty nice, and you deserve kudos from someone who still can't figure out how to draw two people kissing, and you pulled that off pretty well! keep up the good work.

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Thank you.

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Every time you complain about anime...

I did the breast on purpose because she's supposed to be pressed so hard against him, but I suppose it didn't come out to look that way, did it?

Thanks for the critique! It helps!

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Welcies!

I see! In reality it doesn't bother the eye too much, maybe a couple of folds in the vest could help... details XD

No problem, my pleasure~

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