Uploading as a deviation so I can get some constructive feedback. This is only my second attempt at coloring with photoshop, my first with a mouse and first with cell shading. I hope I'm doing it right. Still going to add some darker shading here and there, and some highlights... I'm kinda happy with how this is going.
I think it looks mighty fine for a first attempt! You didn't overdo it like first time users tend to do, and simple cel shading is always a winning choice.
If I had to be picky, I'd say that the shading on Rose's face is a bit incongrous with the light source, since it's supposed to be on the darker side. Though I understand it might bother you to have her face in the dark, since the pic is focused on the kiss, so it's no big deal. (I just noticed, the way her breast kind of perks up is a little weird, too. XD' )
Just trying to help; overall it's pretty nice, and you deserve kudos from someone who still can't figure out how to draw two people kissing, and you pulled that off pretty well! keep up the good work.
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Props for cell-shading, it r hard to resist TEH URGE 2 BLEND. I knowz.
Definately crisp and pretty, and I'm in love with Dr---...Scorpious' expression of teh wuvz. <3
MUDKIPZ!?!?!?!
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Whoadeah.
If I had to be picky, I'd say that the shading on Rose's face is a bit incongrous with the light source, since it's supposed to be on the darker side. Though I understand it might bother you to have her face in the dark, since the pic is focused on the kiss, so it's no big deal.
(I just noticed, the way her breast kind of perks up is a little weird, too. XD' )
Just trying to help; overall it's pretty nice, and you deserve kudos from someone who still can't figure out how to draw two people kissing, and you pulled that off pretty well! keep up the good work.
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Thanks for the critique! It helps!
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No problem, my pleasure~
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